Thursday, October 13, 2005

An ode to love

(Have been reading 'luv' stuff for some time now and was thus inspired to write a piece myself)

We started out as an ocean,
Full of energy, full of enthusiasm
Waves of love flowed in us
Even as we repeatedly lashed shores of bliss.

The ocean was full of hidden treasures
Treasures called happiness and joy
The ultimate joy in love came
When the two of us were together.

A tsunami struck, and the ocean
The ocean, full of purity and innocence,
Split into two small streams
You in one, I in another.

In one stream, you sail lonely
In another, I sail with no joy
We chose to sail in small streams
When we could continue riding in the ocean.

The big ocean looks so tempting now,
But yes, the small stream has its own charm
Whether we end as two streams or one ocean,
only Time will tell.

1 Comments:

Blogger archies world said...

hey rim..

well the ocean seemed huge and so was the idea...i do hope u end up as the mighty ocean...one

9:11 PM PDT  

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